WHY?????
WATER
Strong, angry
Rolling, wreaking, razing
A beautifully built
Ship
In the sea
Waves.
LIFE
Weak, fragile
Sacrificing, wanting, fighting
Everyday’s quest
In this wondrous
World
Me.
PROBLEM
Intricate, difficult
Ravaging, subverting, extorting
A woman’s heart
Everywhere
Anywhere
Proposition
August 16th, 2005 at 2:40 pm
Hi maffey! you’re so deep, mysterious…=)
August 17th, 2005 at 3:31 pm
You’re so deep as mentioned by geofel;-(. Life is what we make it. If there are problems to be solved, there will be a solution that will follow soon.So let us fight, fight and fight.
August 18th, 2005 at 8:48 am
Oh, I never thought you could write such a good poem! You must be a poet at heart, huh? I salute to you!
August 18th, 2005 at 12:23 pm
thank you so much for the appreciation. is that a praise or a compliment? just kidding.
August 18th, 2005 at 12:27 pm
hi geofel & melith thanks for your comments. Experiences will make us deep especially if we are emotional ;-).
August 18th, 2005 at 1:45 pm
I don’t think it is a good one and I don’t think it is a poem.
I guess you have so many questions in life Maff coz your “poem” indicates sacrifices and sufferings.
Forget whatever past you had. Come to think of a better tomorrow.
IF YOU WOULD KEEP ON ASKING “WHY”? YOU WILL END YOUR LIFE WITH “wHY”.
August 18th, 2005 at 6:16 pm
whhhy! you’re so deep
August 18th, 2005 at 6:45 pm
you’re right jewel. it’s all refers to my life. thanks for your advice, i will try that.
August 18th, 2005 at 9:54 pm
This is an AWESOME website. Especially for someone who has never been to the Phillippines! I think I will be back again!!